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"Teach me," Vance whispered.

Dr. Elias Vance, a man whose lab coat looked ironed enough to perform surgery on its own, peered over Aris’s shoulder. "Nonsense. We’re colleagues. I brought the champagne." amatuer

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Vance dropped his glass. The champagne splattered his perfect shoes, but he didn't notice. He walked toward the cradle, mesmerized. "The grain... Aris, look at the grain alignment." " Vance whispered. Dr. Elias Vance